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Chapter 2 of 
's Secret War....
this is part of a collaborative effort between me and
; I don't think she's got her pages up yet - which come before mine - so fingers crossed that it all makes sense lol
so this is the first of two pages from me; here Blitz has ambushed Holly, as part of the Villains' assault on the Heroes. However, he is doesnt want to try and kill her because he only takes orders from his Führer, not upstarts like Zerkov. so he tries to convince her to play along, act like he's killed her and such..... Holly is having none of it though!
note the subtle use of a palm-mounted blaster. hmm.
I'll put a link to ~lucida-lownes's previous pages when she submits them
my next page will follow
EDIT: added charred bits to his face, but my wacom drivers failed! no pressure sensitivity
's Secret War....this is part of a collaborative effort between me and
; I don't think she's got her pages up yet - which come before mine - so fingers crossed that it all makes sense lolso this is the first of two pages from me; here Blitz has ambushed Holly, as part of the Villains' assault on the Heroes. However, he is doesnt want to try and kill her because he only takes orders from his Führer, not upstarts like Zerkov. so he tries to convince her to play along, act like he's killed her and such..... Holly is having none of it though!
note the subtle use of a palm-mounted blaster. hmm.
I'll put a link to ~lucida-lownes's previous pages when she submits them
my next page will follow
EDIT: added charred bits to his face, but my wacom drivers failed! no pressure sensitivity
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Technique ImpactWell this is a fancy new critique system. lets give it a go then!! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)" /> Im not the best at giving crits. :\first off, It is a really good pic, I can tell you took your time and its definitely nicely laid out.
I do think there could have been a bit more highlighting and shading on the guy as he looks a bit flat compared to the girl.
The last pannel is good but i think you could have gone a bit further with it, maybe his jaw could look broken or the fabric ruffled, it is fabric on him right?
right well i waffled on a bit there cos i needed 100 words or more...
All in all good work! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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